If I ask questions,
If I seek other options,
If I ask why the sun sets
If I scorn those asleep in death
I am a Rebel.
Can I try to catch fire?
Can I call the old man a liar?
Can I ask the elders why?
Can I, the standing norms refuse to buy?
Yes but I shall become a Rebel.
If I do anything never before done
I am a Rebel.
If I seek other options,
If I ask why the sun sets
If I scorn those asleep in death
I am a Rebel.
Can I try to catch fire?
Can I call the old man a liar?
Can I ask the elders why?
Can I, the standing norms refuse to buy?
Yes but I shall become a Rebel.
If I do anything never before done
I am a Rebel.
Rhetorical. I like.
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ReplyDeleteI like the carefully chosen words but pour more emotions into it... Nice job, I love the poem
ReplyDeleteThis writer is going places..... good job ma
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